METATRON: well, since you're asking...
METATRON: the story was structurally sound and nurtured with meaningful prose, albeit a bit rushed at times.
METATRON: the dialogue fits the setting to a capital t, without dipping into being overbearing or unnatural — an achievement, considering how these historical fantasies tend to go!
METATRON: however, i would argue that it says far more about you than it does of your lovely cast.
SOVA: (in what regard?)
METATRON: not quite sure.
METATRON: maybe you should be the one telling me?
METATRON: the story was structurally sound and nurtured with meaningful prose, albeit a bit rushed at times.
METATRON: the dialogue fits the setting to a capital t, without dipping into being overbearing or unnatural — an achievement, considering how these historical fantasies tend to go!
METATRON: however, i would argue that it says far more about you than it does of your lovely cast.
SOVA: (in what regard?)
METATRON: not quite sure.
METATRON: maybe you should be the one telling me?